Plan

1- Illyria is distracted, Jaheira is concerned.
2- Why Jaheira became a druid; how Lyr came close to being a druid.
3- Jaheira is concerned about Illyria re reticence
4- Illyria tells Jaheira she knows she's going insane
5- Jaheira comforts Illyria.

Jaheira:
Illyria, would you please stop daydreaming! We have more important things to do than wait for you to come back to your senses.

Illyria:
Am I to to obey your every whim, Jaheira? I have more important things to do than listen to you complain.

Jaheira:
Do not be daft, Illyria, I am concerned with your well-being! What if we are attacked and you are not ready? If you make a mistake it could mean failure for all of us, in whatever we are doing, perhaps even death. Are you prepared to risk that, Illyria?

Illyria:
I'm sorry, Jaheira, I did not mean to snap at you... I just have a lot on my mind at the moment. It's hard to stay attentive with a thousand and one things niggling at you.

Jaheira:
I understand, but please, at least make a semblence of an effort to be aware of what is happening around us, if only for my peace of mind!

Illyria:
I shall do my best, oh mighty one.

Jaheira:
Enough, Illyria, we have more important things to attend to.

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Illyria:
Jaheira, why did you become a druid?

Jaheira:
Nature has always been part of my life, it seemed only natural to help protect and nurture it. I was raised by druids from a very young age- some of my fondest memories are of the trees, and their comforting presence will stay with me always.

Jaheira:
It was not so much a choice as a calling; Nature called to me, and I answered. It was not a hard decision to serve she who had protected me for so long. Why do you ask?

Illyria:
I have always felt a peculiar affinity for nature; when I was little, I used to spend quite a bit of time in the woods near our house. I came very close to becoming a druid, I think, and sometimes I still wonder if I made the right decision to become a cleric.

Jaheira:
I thought it would be as such. It is a very personal question, Illyria, and one only you can answer.

Illyria:
Perhaps...

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Jaheira:
Illyria, are you alright? You have been rather reticent lately; you are inattentive, and you frequently go for long periods without talking to anyone. Is everything alright?

Illyria:
I am... I am not sure. No, not sure at all. Its just that... since it happened, I have felt so empty. So unbalanced. So... wrong.

Jaheira:
I have sensed that something was amiss...

Illyria:
It is though a part of me is missing. Like Imoen and her soul. It feels as she described to me... Except it is still there... damaged.

Jaheira:
You... you believe your soul is damaged? How could this be possible?

Illyria:
I do not know... no... but the trees might. I shall ask them, they might know.

Jaheira:
...Something is wrong. Dreadfully wrong. I can feel it. Illyria?

Illyria:
(silence)

Jaheira:
Very wrong indeed...

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Illyria:
Jaheira... I feel it now. Jaheira, it is coming. So... so close now.

Jaheira:
What... what is coming, Illyria?

Illyria:
The darkness. The claws are in my mind... in my mind already. I know what is happening, Jaheira... it is retribution for destroying L'Sirr. It is coming...
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Jaheira, the madness is coming. Please... help. Not long now; a few days at most.

Jaheira:
Insanity?! But... I would suggest staying calm; focus on calm. Illyria, speak to <CHARNAME> if anything occurs... I am here also, if you have need of me.

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Illyria:
Th... they told me this would happen...

Jaheira:
Who told you what? Girl, try to speak more clearly, look at me.

Illyria:
The... the voices. In my head... they came with the d-darkness, and they claw and bite and shout and scream and my head hurts, Heira, it hurts...

Jaheira:
I'm not entirely sure what I can do to help you, Illyria...

Illyria:
(Hugs Jaheira, eyes dark) Don't go! I... please stay with me... I don't want to be alone with it...

Jaheira:
I, well, alright, if it makes you feel better...






QUOTE(K'aeloree @ Mar 8 2006, 04:49 PM) *

Plan

1- Illyria is distracted, Jaheira is concerned.
2- Why Jaheira became a druid; how Lyr came close to being a druid.
3- Jaheira is concerned about Illyria re reticence
4- Illyria tells Jaheira she knows she's going insane
5- Jaheira comforts Illyria.

Jaheira:
Illyria, would you please stop daydreaming! We have more important things to do than wait for you to come back to your senses.

Illyria:
Am I to to obey your every whim, Jaheira? I have more important things to do than listen to you complain.

Jaheira:
Do not be daft, Illyria, I am concerned with your well-being! What if we are attacked and you are not ready? If you make a mistake it could mean failure for all of us, in whatever we are doing, perhaps even death. Are you prepared to risk that, Illyria?

Illyria:
I'm sorry, Jaheira, I did not mean to snap at you... I just have a lot on my mind at the moment. It's hard to stay attentive with a thousand and one things niggling at you.

Jaheira:
I understand, but please, at least make a semblence of an effort to be aware of what is happening around us, if only for my peace of mind!

Illyria:
I shall do my best, oh mighty one.

Jaheira:
Enough, Illyria, we have more important things to attend to.


Pshh, Jaheria should have bitch slapped her. Seeing as this is their first banter I think Jaheria would be slightly snappier, not so quick to forgive. Because, she's a WhoryMcWhore who's going through menopause.
QUOTE(K'aeloree @ Mar 8 2006, 04:49 PM) *

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Illyria:
Jaheira, why did you become a druid?

Jaheira:
Nature has always been part of my life, it seemed only natural to help protect and nurture it. I was raised by druids from a very young age- some of my fondest memories are of the trees, and their comforting presence will stay with me always.

Jaheira:
It was not so much a choice as a calling; Nature called to me, and I answered. It was not a hard decision to serve she who had protected me for so long. Why do you ask?

Illyria:
I have always felt a peculiar affinity for nature; when I was little, I used to spend quite a bit of time in the woods near our house. I came very close to becoming a druid, I think, and sometimes I still wonder if I made the right decision to become a cleric.

Jaheira:
I thought it would be as such. It is a very personal question, Illyria, and one only you can answer.

Illyria:
Perhaps...

Haha, I can see after this banter Jaheir becoming over protective and motherly.
QUOTE(K'aeloree @ Mar 8 2006, 04:49 PM) *

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Jaheira:
Illyria, are you alright? You have been rather reticent lately; you are inattentive, and you frequently go for long periods without talking to anyone. Is everything alright?
I'd change it to be

Illyria, you have been rather reticent lately; you are inattentive, and you frequently go for long periods without talking to anyone. Is everything alright?

Or something to that effect. The re-asking of the question is weird.
Illyria:
I am... I am not sure. No, not sure at all. Its just that... since it happened, I have felt so empty. So unbalanced. So... wrong.

Jaheira:
I have sensed that something was amiss...

"Because I am annoying"
QUOTE(K'aeloree @ Mar 8 2006, 04:49 PM) *

Illyria:
It is though a part of me is missing. Like Imoen and her soul. It feels as she described to me... Except it is still there... damaged.

Jaheira:
You... you believe your soul is damaged? How could this be possible?

Illyria:
I do not know... no... but the trees might. I shall ask them, they might know.

Jaheira:
...Something is wrong. Dreadfully wrong. I can feel it. Illyria?

Illyria:
(silence)

Jaheira:
Very wrong indeed...

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Illyria:
Jaheira... I feel it now. Jaheira, it is coming. So... so close now.

Jaheira:
What... what is coming, Illyria?

Illyria:
The darkness. The claws are in my mind... in my mind already. I know what is happening, Jaheira... it is retribution for destroying L'Sirr. It is coming...
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Jaheira, the madness is coming. Please... help. Not long now; a few days at most.

Jaheira:
Insanity?! But... I would suggest staying calm; focus on calm. Illyria, speak to <CHARNAME> if anything occurs... I am here also, if you have need of me.

Maybe something about seeing a Healer should be said?
QUOTE(K'aeloree @ Mar 8 2006, 04:49 PM) *

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Illyria:
Th... they told me this would happen...

Jaheira:
Who told you what? Girl, try to speak more clearly, look at me.

Illyria:
The... the voices. In my head... they came with the d-darkness, and they claw and bite and shout and scream and my head hurts, Heira, it hurts...

Jaheira:
I'm not entirely sure what I can do to help you, Illyria...

Illyria:
(Hugs Jaheira, eyes dark) Don't go! I... please stay with me... I don't want to be alone with it...

Jaheira:
I, well, alright, if it makes you feel better...

Haha, Jaheira doesn't seem very worried. Is that on purpose?







QUOTE(Darktail @ Mar 9 2006, 05:29 PM) *

Pshh, Jaheria should have bitch slapped her. Seeing as this is their first banter I think Jaheria would be slightly snappier, not so quick to forgive. Because, she's a WhoryMcWhore who's going through menopause.


Well, actually, this is Illyria's 4rth banter with Heira... the other ones are in the topic entitled 'SoA Banters - Jaheira' ;P But, you have a point... more snappiness shall come forth from the ethers. Or something.

QUOTE(Darktail @ Mar 9 2006, 05:29 PM) *

Haha, I can see after this banter Jaheir becoming over protective and motherly.


... you've just scarred the collective consciousness of thousands, I think... tongue.gif WHAT HAVE I DONE?! WHAT MONSTER AM I GOING TO RELEASE IN JAHEIRA?!

... Find out in the next episode of 'Jaheira's Sex Change!'


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"Because I am annoying"


Haha... I can tell you simply love Heira to pieces ;-) and you have a point, will fix that.

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Maybe something about seeing a Healer should be said?


Thats probably a good idea... though I'm not sure what a Healer can do about broken souls tongue.gif There are no spells which can cure Illyria, because part of her soul is absolutely destroyed- it can't be recalled, or summoned, or anything'd. But yes, she probably would mutter something about a healer... I'm thinking of making Heira speak to <CHARNAME> about it.

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Haha, Jaheira doesn't seem very worried. Is that on purpose?


Not really; if you can tell me what Jaheira worried sounds like, I'd be happy to oblige tongue.gif I opted for 'freaked out', and I imagine she'd be a tad uncomfortable with Illyria using her as a pillow, so I went for a bit stilted too.







QUOTE(K'aeloree @ Mar 9 2006, 04:20 PM) *

Not really; if you can tell me what Jaheira worried sounds like, I'd be happy to oblige tongue.gif I opted for 'freaked out', and I imagine she'd be a tad uncomfortable with Illyria using her as a pillow, so I went for a bit stilted too.


She'd probably scream to (I actually wrote Shar here for a second, which was a pretty weird Freudian Slip. Obviously my subconcious is thinking about Viccy in order to save my sanity from the whorebag that is JaJa) a lot. Then bitch at anyone about how they "WOULDn'T UNDERSTAND!@!2456!$@!@!!oNEoneonEONEELEVENTY!@!&^!@&*BBQ"

Then update her livejournal and go cut.









This is what I've come to the conclusion should happen.


Illyria:
*dramatically* Jaheira... I'm going crazy! PINKPURPLEBUNNYRABBITSWITHCHEESEANDLOLLIES!Aaaaathgu.

Jaheira:
Sh*tsh*tsh*t! What am I sposed to do? SHI*T SH*T F*CK SH*T! She's going mad! Crap crap crap!
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Okay... breathe... what would <CHARNAME> do...
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No, to hell with that, what would Viconia do?!

Viconia:
Slit the pests throat, of course... with liberal seasoning, she could be quite a tasty meal...

Jaheira:
WTF?! Since when is Viconia a vampire?!

Viconia:
Only since Jan had his sex change... I'm sorry, Janet.

Jaheira:
*curls up in the fetal position and rocks*

Viconia:
Does this mean I can have lunch?!

Jaheira:
*continues rocking*

Viconia:
W00t! *drinks Illyria's blood*

Anomen:
WTF, dude... *moves hand in front of face*
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Wooooaaaah... pretty colours...

<CHARNAME>:
*killed by Janet's rogue bootheel, which follows him/her like a dog*

Mystra:
Muahahaha, my plans have come to fruition! Go, my pretties! Cause havok and chaos, let them know what I REALLY stand for!

Monkeys with Wings:
*fall off cloud to their deaths*

Mystra:
... crap. I forgot to teach them how to fly.

Torm:
Good one, Mystra... *rolls eyes* Really intelligent.

Mystra:
*cries*

Jaheira:
Stuff this... I'm going to the brothel... I mean, festhall... (stupid designers... should be slapped... *Heira continues grumbling*

Imoen:
Woah, its like, the apocalypse on drugs!
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... please tell me its the apocalypse on drugs! Pleeease!


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I am not hypo... shut up shut up. I thought it was funny, okay...! XD












QUOTE(K'aeloree @ Mar 8 2006, 12:49 AM) *


Jaheira:
Illyria, would you please stop daydreaming! We have more important things to do than wait for you to come back to your senses.


Here's a small input from me smile.gif I think you should rather kick out the "Please" and leave it "Illyria, would you stop daydreaming!" - it's edgy, it's sharp, it's Jaheira

QUOTE(K'aeloree @ Mar 8 2006, 12:49 AM) *

Jaheira:
I understand, but please, at least make a semblence of an effort to be aware of what is happening around us, if only for my peace of mind!


I think this one shoul be "I understand, but you should at least make a semblence of an effort to be aware of what is happening around us, if only for my peace of mind!"

QUOTE(K'aeloree @ Mar 8 2006, 12:49 AM) *

Illyria:
I shall do my best, oh mighty one.

Jaheira:
Enough, Illyria, we have more important things to attend to.


Maybe here at the end it could go like "Enough, Illyria, we have more important things to do" and then perhaps realising she was being a bit harsh, finishes the dialogue with "Come along, now."


QUOTE(K'aeloree @ Mar 8 2006, 12:49 AM) *

Jaheira:
Illyria, are you alright? You have been rather reticent lately; you are inattentive, and you frequently go for long periods without talking to anyone. Is everything alright?


Jaheira won't ask any unecessary questions if she knows the answer or already senses trouble. I'm guessing like: "Illyria, what is wrong? You have been rather reticent lately; you are inattentive, and you frequently go for long periods without talking to anyone. What troubles you?"


QUOTE(K'aeloree @ Mar 8 2006, 12:49 AM) *

Jaheira:
Insanity?! But... I would suggest staying calm; focus on calm. Illyria, speak to <CHARNAME> if anything occurs... I am here also, if you have need of me.


"Insanity?! But... You should remain calm; focus on calm. Illyria, speak to <CHARNAME> if anything occurs...I am here as well, if you have need of me." - would be my guess.