[quote name='Azkyroth' date='Mar 15 2006, 03:46 PM' post='243278']
First things first: did you forget to lock the Developer's Journal thread, or is that intentional?  :huh:[/quote]

Lol, its just easier to leave it unlocked... and if anyone posts there, its easy enough to move it :-)

[quote]What I'm trying to do with Arkalian is limit public information to what the player finds out by the time they're about 1/4-1/3 of the way through the Relationship plot in SOA, and then making judgement calls on individual items beyond that.  Also, I'm somewhat getting the impression that "show, don't tell" is a rather underused technique in modding, especially in the build-up to revelations of pivotal events in the character past.[/quote]

That sounds about the same as Lyr; except the relationship can differ, so it makes it a tad more complex. I've settled on hints on the 'larger' plot and a slightly more detailed overview of the main SoA quest. :-)

[quote]I volunteer as well, due to a combination of a past history of being consulted extensively by friends for editorial services and not being under a completely ridiculous workload at the moment.[/quote]

Thanks! You have a new PM- well, a reply, anywho! :hug: :-)



[QUOTE]And yeah, I'm more than happy to proofread or critique the storyline; go ahead and send :)[/QUOTE]

Wow, that'd be wonderful- I'll send the history ASAP, I just need to edit some bits so they are more in line with canon FR (Feanor has been giving me history/geography/elven lessons *grins).

I've sent the starting plot and the neutral good path plot... C&C would be BRILLIANT, thanks!

:-)