[DONE] Proofreading for Hanna NPC Mod

Date: 19th November 2010

Looking for: one or two proofreaders to check my translation of the Hanna NPC Mod for BG2
Content for proofreading: about 90 kb in .tra files (see attachment: http://www.shsforums...attach_id=22075)

Deadline: There is no deadline (I hope to make it for a Xmas release )


Mod Information:

Version: 2.3
Status: COMPLETED
Creator: Eslizón (drizzt905@hotmail.com)
Language: Castilian, German

Hanna comes from an old family of rangers who dedicated themselves to protecting the people in the vicinity of Myth Drannor for generations. Since they were children, Hanna's father took them into the forest, when pursuing various evil creatures to preserve peace and justice in the village, and both Hanna and her brother began to learn the trade of their father, although this didn't please their mother. Years later, while in her youth, her father died, and her older brother took over his father's work. Everyone thought that Hanna was not suitable for the job being a woman, so Hanna felt hurt and left, taking along the traditional Guardian Sword of her family. Since then she roamed the Realms, devoted primarily to improve her already impressive skills and to become as skilled as her father one day, and show everyone that women can also be a great beast hunters. This lifestyle has made Hanna a lonesome ranger, little concerned about social relations. She feels more comfortable in a forgotten dungeon, her sword at hand, than in big cities.

This Mod includes:
- Hanna, a new NPC
- Dozens of interactions with the player and other playable NPCs
- 20 new objects, including Hanna's family sword
- A new quest if Hanna is in your group
- Her own epilogue
- Includes the "Enhanced De'Arnise Keep" Mod, the Minimods "Improved Irenicus", "Improved Irenicus Dragon" and others, making the encounters with Irenicus, the Dragon and other encounters more difficult, improving their scripts, having them call allies beside them or giving them more power or powerful objects.

Mod download: http://www.shsforums...ds&showfile=821

Edited by Xicloing, 05 January 2011 - 06:00 PM.

Update of the translated files:
- added some TRAs from previously untrayfied BAF Files
- first proofreading by all the small files

So only the main file (hanna.tra) hasn't been proofread at least once.

Edited by Xicloing, 05 January 2011 - 05:58 PM.

Well, we haven't made it for a Xmas release, but thanks to Lollorian (again) it's done.

New version available from the Clan REO download section.

Edited by Xicloing, 11 January 2011 - 11:47 AM.

I'm putting this here because I don't know where else. I also sent an email to the above address, but if someone knows where I can find an official Hanna forum or a mod maintainer or whether there are other download sites, please let me know.

 

EDIT: Is fixed in v2.5.

 

 

In hanna.d, the following dialogue is repeating itself, because the variable is not closing:

 

IF ~Global("DialogosconHanna","LOCALS",4)~ THEN BEGIN HannaBanner04
SAY @62 /* ~Hecho de menos las enseñanzas de mi padre. <Charname> ¿Tuviste tu algún tutor que te iniciara?~ */
IF ~~ THEN REPLY @63 /* ~Si tuve uno. Un gran hombre fue mi padre adoptivo Gorion un hombre muy sabio y un gran mago.~ */ GOTO HannaBanner05
IF ~~ THEN REPLY @64 /* ~No tubo ningún tutor me forje a mi mismo en el fragor de la batalla.~ */ GOTO HannaBanner05
IF ~~ THEN REPLY @65 /* ~No lo sabias. Elminther fue mi tutor ¿Por qué crees que soy tan bueno en esto?~ */ GOTO HannaBanner05
IF ~~ THEN REPLY @66 /* ~Creo que no es momento de charlar. Tal vez en otra ocasión.~ */ EXIT
END

 

This should be:

 

IF ~Global("DialogosconHanna","LOCALS",4)~ THEN BEGIN HannaBanner04
SAY @62 /* ~Hecho de menos las enseñanzas de mi padre. <Charname> ¿Tuviste tu algún tutor que te iniciara?~ */
IF ~~ THEN REPLY @63 /* ~Si tuve uno. Un gran hombre fue mi padre adoptivo Gorion un hombre muy sabio y un gran mago.~ */ DO ~IncrementGlobal("DialogosconHanna","LOCALS",1)~ GOTO HannaBanner05
IF ~~ THEN REPLY @64 /* ~No tubo ningún tutor me forje a mi mismo en el fragor de la batalla.~ */ DO ~IncrementGlobal("DialogosconHanna","LOCALS",1)~ GOTO HannaBanner05
IF ~~ THEN REPLY @65 /* ~No lo sabias. Elminther fue mi tutor ¿Por qué crees que soy tan bueno en esto?~ */ DO ~IncrementGlobal("DialogosconHanna","LOCALS",1)~ GOTO HannaBanner05
IF ~~ THEN REPLY @66 /* ~Creo que no es momento de charlar. Tal vez en otra ocasión.~ */ DO ~IncrementGlobal("DialogosconHanna","LOCALS",1)~ EXIT
END

Edited by jastey, 02 August 2020 - 12:36 PM.