Looks great Quitch! That Vidar character has grabbed my attention for some reason...
The smell of cliche?
The language is very rich and fluent, and you have some very different choices.
Some of those choices will only be seen by players of a certain INT, since they require a little more thought to come up with. The thick Imoen chat is missing an option, since the player simply isn't smart enough to think of it.
There's a lot of that sort of thing in this quest. Different people will see different things depending on their character.
Another interesting thing I see, is that you don't seem to be participating in Fanfic boards (despite your dedicated writing). Although JCompton nor Simon participate either (I've seen some quality writing from both of them).
This mod is my fanfiction. I've never felt the need to write stories over on the board. Actually, I did start work on a short story once, but didn't get very far. I get bored easily.
P.S. Mind if I ask you how you got 25 timestop scrolls and 7 meteor swarm scrolls there (the screen with outside fighting with Sarevok selected)?
That Cuv's party, you'd need to ask him. All the shots are his.
One last question about this mod for now (I read the FAQ once long ago...): Will the SoA Windspear be expanded?
There was discussion of adding something that would hint at events to come (we have made a couple of subtle
SoA additions that most people will likely never notice), but this hasn't been finalised yet.
