Heh, the soul mark of Edwin sounds very, very much like him. Looking forwards to your next chapter
I thought it would be something he would like. Next chapter is up and running away!
Comments on "Misery & Happiness"
Started by Jolyth, Jan 25 2005 06:14 AM
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Posted 07 August 2007 - 03:39 PM
I thought it would be something he would like. Next chapter is up and running away!
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Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
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Posted 07 August 2007 - 03:40 PM
Hey, it's 'Misery and Happiness'! I first came across this on gamejag.net, and really enjoyed reading the on going Anni-saga. I have a lot of catching up to do it seems, but it's nice to see you continuing it
Good luck with it in the future.
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Thanks! It's still on Gamejag but I brought it here too and finally caught it up to pace with the main site of the story.
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Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
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Posted 11 August 2007 - 06:21 PM
Hey SaintZenn, I love your new background on Sendai here! Not only is it a good new chapter, it really fills out the character as well as giving a background to some of the minor characters from the game. Interesting work.
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Posted 12 August 2007 - 05:31 AM
Hey SaintZenn, I love your new background on Sendai here! Not only is it a good new chapter, it really fills out the character as well as giving a background to some of the minor characters from the game. Interesting work.
Thank you! I really feel that some of the Bhaalspawn need better lives than they were given. Don't expect all of them to be so nice.
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Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
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Posted 25 August 2007 - 07:59 PM
Whoah. Very nice twist near the end, SaintZenn. And the scene with Bhaal and all the others was strangely heartwarming too. 
Looking forwards to seeing what will happen next to Anni, and how Minsc and Boo got involved.
Looking forwards to seeing what will happen next to Anni, and how Minsc and Boo got involved.
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
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And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
#46
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Posted 26 August 2007 - 01:04 PM
Whoah. Very nice twist near the end, SaintZenn. And the scene with Bhaal and all the others was strangely heartwarming too.
Looking forwards to seeing what will happen next to Anni, and how Minsc and Boo got involved.
You'll find Bhaal is very heartwarming when he wants to be. The taint unfortunately is not. But that's for later.
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Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
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Posted 30 August 2007 - 12:51 AM
I love your writing style, SaintZenn. Everything is written in such a lyrical style. So, is Anni going to say 'yes'? I'm eager to find out.
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Posted 07 September 2007 - 05:09 PM
Soft and beautiful new chapter . Can I really say more? The way you write Edwin is incredible.
. Can I really say more? The way you write Edwin is incredible.
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
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And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
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Posted 22 October 2007 - 11:29 PM
New chapter looks good. I like how you portray Valygar and his daughter.
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Posted 23 October 2007 - 04:15 AM
Soft and beautiful new chapter
Thanks, I try to balance his eviliness with his total awesomeness.
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Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
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Posted 23 October 2007 - 04:16 AM
New chapter looks good. I like how you portray Valygar and his daughter.
There will be more to come as you need to know Jessie's teenhood and stuff. Hope you like Boba!
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Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
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Posted 29 October 2007 - 03:38 AM
The relationship between Valygar and his daughter was portrayed beautifully... with the part near the end being particularly foreboding. I'm eagerly looking forwards to more of this, SaintZenn . You really manage to bring a nice touch to many characters from the games I'd never thought too much about.
. You really manage to bring a nice touch to many characters from the games I'd never thought too much about.
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
***
And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
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Posted 21 December 2007 - 10:31 PM
I swear I should (and possibly will) kick myself silly for not posting sooner, but eh, anyway.
The new chapter looks wonderful, SaintZenn.
Got an intense feeling for what Jaheira was going through, the dream-like experience which tormented with her psyche and the fact her friends and husband were dead - very well executed.
I think the thing that hit me the hardest was to find Edwin Odesserion as the one she went to, quite the opposite to what you'd normally expect.
Anyway, I loved the new addition, and the take on Jaheira's inner thoughts - priceless.
The new chapter looks wonderful, SaintZenn.
Got an intense feeling for what Jaheira was going through, the dream-like experience which tormented with her psyche and the fact her friends and husband were dead - very well executed.
I think the thing that hit me the hardest was to find Edwin Odesserion as the one she went to, quite the opposite to what you'd normally expect.
Anyway, I loved the new addition, and the take on Jaheira's inner thoughts - priceless.
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Posted 23 December 2007 - 03:46 AM
Lovely new chapter. Can't wait to see what comes next.
One mistake, though:
I think that second "white" was supposed to be something else, right?
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One mistake, though:
Chapter 45: Goes together like a horse and carriage....
Above her beloved?s head, another head appeared, this one with shockingly white hair that had once been white. Something in his young life had scared the man until his hair turned white. He had survived but he still wasn?t as brave as her-
I think that second "white" was supposed to be something else, right?
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Posted 23 December 2007 - 06:57 AM
I swear I should (and possibly will) kick myself silly for not posting sooner, but eh, anyway.
The new chapter looks wonderful, SaintZenn.
Got an intense feeling for what Jaheira was going through, the dream-like experience which tormented with her psyche and the fact her friends and husband were dead - very well executed.
I think the thing that hit me the hardest was to find Edwin Odesserion as the one she went to, quite the opposite to what you'd normally expect.
Anyway, I loved the new addition, and the take on Jaheira's inner thoughts - priceless.
Thank you! I was trying my best. Keep reading!
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Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
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Posted 23 December 2007 - 06:57 AM
Lovely new chapter. Can't wait to see what comes next.
One mistake, though:Chapter 45: Goes together like a horse and carriage....
Above her beloved?s head, another head appeared, this one with shockingly white hair that had once been white. Something in his young life had scared the man until his hair turned white. He had survived but he still wasn?t as brave as her-
I think that second "white" was supposed to be something else, right?
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Yes it was suppose to be blonde
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Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
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Posted 23 December 2007 - 11:31 PM
A very powerful chapter SaintZenn... which only goes to show that hey, I don't think any of us can be the best writer in the world. But even then, you're still a very good one. . The messages and the underlying meanings behind your story always shine through, and your latest portrayal of Jaheira and Edwin was intriguing.
Please do continue writing, SaintZenn. You're better at it than you think.
. The messages and the underlying meanings behind your story always shine through, and your latest portrayal of Jaheira and Edwin was intriguing. Please do continue writing, SaintZenn. You're better at it than you think.
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
***
And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
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Posted 26 December 2007 - 09:51 AM
A very powerful chapter SaintZenn... which only goes to show that hey, I don't think any of us can be the best writer in the world. But even then, you're still a very good one.
Please do continue writing, SaintZenn. You're better at it than you think.
Thanks. I try my best. After all, this is all pratice for the big times.
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Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
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Posted 27 December 2007 - 01:01 AM
Writing should be fun. Don't worry so much about perfection/being the best. Focus on your own work and just enjoy the ride that is life.
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Posted 27 December 2007 - 05:35 AM
Writing should be fun. Don't worry so much about perfection/being the best. Focus on your own work and just enjoy the ride that is life.
(*Begin Joke*)Remember only Swedes who haven't slept in 2 days and have consumed massive amounts of sugar are capable of sporadically writing masterpiece stories(*end of joke*)
Thank you for your support and kind words. Keep reading!
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Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
Mme. Thenardier:
I used to dream that I would meet a prince
But God Almighty, have you seen what's happened since?
Master of the house? Isn't worth me spit!
`Comforter, philosopher' and lifelong sh*t!
Cunning little brain, regular Voltaire
Thinks he's quite a lover but there's not much there
What a cruel trick of nature landed me with such a louse
God knows how I've lasted living with this bastard in the house!
