The novel itself is HERE
To repeat my comments from the novel thread itself, my main reason for posting it was just to satisfy the curiosity of the few people who have PM'd me to ask where I got the idea of Chrysta from. However, if anyone chooses to comment on the novel to this point then I want to stress that I am not fishing for false praise here, and would rather my efforts be savaged in a constructive way than praised without cause. I would like to finish the novel, and if no one tells me where I am going wrong at the moment I can't improve, can I?
One thing I will say is that the novel had not progressed far enough for the strong female characters to make an appearance and/or make their presences felt, just in case it appears I have been rather mysoginistic in my writing
So please feel free to say things as you see them without fear of recriminations or reprisals
Edited by Sir Kalthorine, 29 March 2005 - 10:05 AM.