An axe-wielding dwarf liked to play
In blood-sports with splatter and spray.
Only too well he knows
How the ears of his foes
Can be had ? in his personal way.
Slightly changed to rhyme.
Yes, sounds better, but we mix past tense with present tense. Changing 'liked' to 'likes' takes care of that.
Thus: An axe-wielding dwarf likes to play...
And an optional one for Immy:
A girl with the hair-colour pink
From her party was torn in a blink
Had to learn that her dad
Was? well, pretty bad
But she came back her true self, I think
Edited by Princeps, 31 October 2005 - 03:41 PM.