In-Game Screenshots!
#1
Posted 16 May 2007 - 12:55 AM
Iylos' Joining dialogue (highlighted option courtesy of the lovely Jolyth!) -
Part of Iylos' first dialogue with the PC -
A dialogue with our darling Imoen! (I had to stop myself from writing more than this one, but I thought one wouldn't hurt... hope all you Imoen fans enjoy it!)
Part of a Sarevok banter (yes, he loves you too, pumpkin) -
Part of an Iylos/Viconia banter -
Another part of said banter (it isn't really as long as it seems, promise!) -
Nyalee interjection -
Part of Iylos' PID talk-menu -
Sendai's lair interjection! Yay spiders! -
Comments, criticism and the like are all welcome!
- Liam
Modding Projects
Complete:
Arath NPC - Nephele NPC - Xulaye NPC - Iylos NPC - Ninde NPC - Darian NPC - Yeslick NPC - Adrian NPC - Dace NPC - Valerie NPC - Isra NPC
Viconia Friendship - Mazzy Friendship - Imoen Friendship - Yoshimo Friendship - Sarevok Friendship - Neera Expansion
IEP Extended Banter
Sarevok Romance
Haer'Dalis Romance
In Progress:
Khadion NPC - Delainy NPC - Sarine NPC
#2
Posted 16 May 2007 - 01:21 AM
First screenshot: a comma is missing after the second 'yes'.
Second screenshot: the second option looks somewhat awkward to me; perhaps "... you are hindering me in any way, you will be gone like a shot ..." -grammatically, "you are 1) hindering and 2) negative influence" do not work well together for me.
First two screenshots have an excellent choice of replies.
Third screenshot: I am sorely missing two replies: a leave-me-be/let's-talk-later/I'm-not-discussing-it-with-*you*-Imoen reply, and something that indicates surprise at her query: I mean, given the plot, Iylos must be the least of PC's worries, so why is she asking about him, not, y'know, The Five and stuff.
Sarevok screenshot: Whom is he addressing? In the original game, he treats neither Imoen nor PC this way, and there are no other Bhaalspawn there, are there?
Viconia: is there a reason for the stream of insults she is blubbering all of a sudden? Has he done something to her before, or harmed her in some other way?
PC-initiated replies: I am missing something I could relate to, something like "What do you think of our situation(The Five and Melissan)?", "Have you read about other Bhaalspawn in a monastery?" or similar. Something that would concern the PC.
All in all, solid work.
IWD NPC, Xan, The Sellswords, Back to Brynnlaw, Assassinations, Dungeon Crawl, Reunion, Branwen, Coran, Tiax, Xan BG1 Friendship
BG1 NPC, Romantic Encounters
#3
Posted 16 May 2007 - 01:47 AM
I have Xan in almost every game I create. I've never romanced him, but he's a great character, so... And thank you for the help!Well, since you have Xan here, I have to say something.
Changed in both cases.First screenshot: a comma is missing after the second 'yes'.
Second screenshot: the second option looks somewhat awkward to me; perhaps "... you are hindering me in any way, you will be gone like a shot ..." -grammatically, "you are 1) hindering and 2) negative influence" do not work well together for me.
First two screenshots have an excellent choice of replies.
Noted down, will add into the next version (or possibly v1.1).Third screenshot: I am sorely missing two replies: a leave-me-be/let's-talk-later/I'm-not-discussing-it-with-*you*-Imoen reply, and something that indicates surprise at her query: I mean, given the plot, Iylos must be the least of PC's worries, so why is she asking about him, not, y'know, The Five and stuff.
Iylos. That's a good point, I didn't realise it would imply he's speaking to a Bhaalspawn; changed to just 'blood boils from your veins!', unless anyone has a better idea. I always find Faerunian insults somewhat hard to write.Sarevok screenshot: Whom is he addressing? In the original game, he treats neither Imoen nor PC this way, and there are no other Bhaalspawn there, are there?
There's a bit of a lead-up to this; he absolutely despises her, and she him, though they - get along, I suppose. Iylos would rather die than fight her, for various reasons (which probably aren't terribly obvious in the mod itself - only if you really delve deeply in his PID, have Viconia in the party, and think about it a lot).Viconia: is there a reason for the stream of insults she is blubbering all of a sudden? Has he done something to her before, or harmed her in some other way?
Great suggestions- will add into next release.PC-initiated replies: I am missing something I could relate to, something like "What do you think of our situation(The Five and Melissan)?", "Have you read about other Bhaalspawn in a monastery?" or similar. Something that would concern the PC.
Edit: Those are only about 3/8 of the PID talks available; they appear somewhat randomly.
Thank you!All in all, solid work.
- Liam
Modding Projects
Complete:
Arath NPC - Nephele NPC - Xulaye NPC - Iylos NPC - Ninde NPC - Darian NPC - Yeslick NPC - Adrian NPC - Dace NPC - Valerie NPC - Isra NPC
Viconia Friendship - Mazzy Friendship - Imoen Friendship - Yoshimo Friendship - Sarevok Friendship - Neera Expansion
IEP Extended Banter
Sarevok Romance
Haer'Dalis Romance
In Progress:
Khadion NPC - Delainy NPC - Sarine NPC