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Looking forwards to more! You've actually got me contemplating actually playing the games now
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Posted 10 June 2008 - 10:08 PM
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
***
And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
Posted 11 June 2008 - 08:36 PM
Wow! That was a great start, Celticrose! I must admit that I'm not familiar with the Icewind Dale Games even though I do have them. But your story really brought it all to life. The only bit of constructive criticism I can probably offer is that there were a few grammatical mistakes, buut things like that are easily fixed
. The characters were very nicely drawn and what you've written so far has been very compelling. I especially like Anariel and Rizdaer's interaction... they really play off each other well.
Looking forwards to more! You've actually got me contemplating actually playing the games now.
Posted 11 June 2008 - 08:51 PM
Thank-you so much for your review. This is my first fanfic and I can admit to being a bit nervous. As to the grammatical errors . . . well, english was not my strong suit in school, (history was).
I am so glad that the characters have come across and I must say that Anariel and Rizdaer are my favorites so far. I hope I am able to continue to keep you wanting more![]()
Thanks again for reading,
CelticRose
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
***
And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
Posted 12 June 2008 - 11:01 AM
Posted 05 July 2008 - 06:51 AM
Classic Adventures - a Total Conversion compilation dedicated to bringing many of the old and new PnP modules into the wonderfully dangerous world that is Baldur's Gate II. Fancy link button to Downloads page.
CA Forum. Bugs to be squashed, feedback to be welcomed!
Website at: http://classicadventuresmod.com/
~***~***~***~
When in doubt, lockpick a mudcrab!
Beware the nug conspiracy!
Posted 15 July 2008 - 01:28 AM
Fie on me for not reviewing this excellent work sooner!
I really like the way you've set the story out CelticRose, and the immersive tension of scenes such as the goodbye between Anariel and her father, or the various scenes involving Rizdaer's knack for attracting trouble simply for being what he is, 'tis really beautiful story telling.
Very interested in seeing where you plan on proceeding next when time allows.Again for such great work.
Posted 16 July 2008 - 11:15 PM
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
***
And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
Posted 17 July 2008 - 01:24 PM
Fantastic new chapter, Celticrose! As involving as the last few, with the cast of characters engaging and the battle scenes well done. Anariel's skill with lockpicks was interesting as well... I wonder if there will be some background to that later? Anyway, on the whole an excellent job, and I really can't wait to see more.
Posted 21 July 2008 - 03:36 PM
Classic Adventures - a Total Conversion compilation dedicated to bringing many of the old and new PnP modules into the wonderfully dangerous world that is Baldur's Gate II. Fancy link button to Downloads page.
CA Forum. Bugs to be squashed, feedback to be welcomed!
Website at: http://classicadventuresmod.com/
~***~***~***~
When in doubt, lockpick a mudcrab!
Beware the nug conspiracy!
Posted 21 July 2008 - 08:39 PM
Always found the intro for Targos to be one of the most challenging points to describe, but you've pulled it off spectacularly Celticrose.
The personalities of each member of the company seem to be well enriched, and well in line with what was shown by Domi's NPC Project. Anariel is particularly interesting, given how as soon as one facet of her personality seems to be 100% known, another pops up and shatters that reader's delusion.![]()
What makes me curious though is if they managed to find the teleporting Brimstone scroll while fighting those goblins.
Either way, loved the new chapter, and the one before it which again I am liable for not reviewing sooner.(and personally, I thought Ulbrec was shorter than Nord
)
Posted 04 August 2008 - 11:48 PM
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
***
And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
Posted 05 August 2008 - 02:43 PM
Posted 16 August 2008 - 10:33 PM
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
***
And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
Posted 17 August 2008 - 03:39 PM
Wow, awesome new chapter, celticrose! It was fascinating (and saddening) to see Rizdaer's past, but it was beautifully and compassionately done. I also love the scene between the three of them - the character interaction was fairly sizzling off the page there, and it was great to see! Can't wait to see what else crosses their way now that Rizdaer is firmly a part of their group.
Posted 03 October 2008 - 04:00 AM
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
***
And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
Posted 05 October 2008 - 08:56 PM
I loved how Rizdaer saved Peony, and Anariel's confrontation was awesome.
I also loved how creepy you made her fight with Ricarver, even though it was so short.
And again, the interaction between Anariel and Rizdaer was beautifully pulled off. Honestly, you draw me into your story with each new chapter, and even though it's been so long I was as riveted as I was when I started. So yes, I'm really looking forwards to more! Thanks again for such an enjoyable read.
Posted 08 October 2008 - 09:05 AM
Posted 09 October 2008 - 08:27 AM
I've been toying with the idea of writing an IWD2 story but simply couldn't pull it off so it's a great pleasure to see someone do it so masterfully. I really enjoyed how you've selected characters and presented them telling just enough to keep me reading and enjoy the story. And the fights are written really well too without going into too much detail (and every fight described is great for me since I don't know how to write action
)
And since I came in with the last chapter I'll just say: Rizdaer pocketed what?! Should I worry about Anariel now or be delighted that he's plotting something?
Excellent work so far
Posted 19 October 2008 - 12:25 AM
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
***
And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
Posted 19 October 2008 - 07:26 PM
It is seriously my lucky day/week, to have so many of my favourite fanfictions update
. You made my day when I swooped in here and saw you'd updated, CelticRose.
I must say, although I'm not quite sure how the new chapter fit in the timeline from the last chapter (nor the ramifications of Anariel under the effects of that magic dust..?) I loved your new work. Again, you have Rizdaer and Anariel down wonderfully, and I couldn't help but laugh at that little aside you added with Peony. Thanks again for a great read, and needles to say, I'm eagerly awaiting more
.