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[-JR-]

Just downloaded her today, and it's looking great so far, but I assume you wish any slight issue reported, so I'll proceed with the nitpicking posts and discuss what I thought of her character once I've seen all of her I can.

One of the replies to a comment on her beauty, she says something along the lines of "you mean to SAY you did not notice so before?" There's two spaces before 'say.'

One of the replies to a query about drow rituals is something like "No surfacer will learn our secrets from my mouth, fool," but I thought that (at this point?) she did not know you were anything other than Veldrin from Ched Nasad.

Also, the download option was a bit hard to get to at first, the coded playtest icon is still up (hence the confusion involving wanting to be a playtester).

Feel free to move, edit, or delete this post if there's already a thread for it.

Edited by SentinelBlade77, 06 January 2009 - 09:48 PM.

[Kaeloree]

Switched a few things around, thanks for pointing that out, SentinalBlade77 -- it should now be a little more obvious whether she's released or not. (I've also added the usual announcements to the forum).

Thanks for pointing out the typos, they'll be fixed for the next version! Keep 'em coming. Much appreciated!

[-JR-]

Of course, more than glad to help

I'm not sure how valid this one is, or whether it's worth changing, and I'm not which way the game has it. When Xulaye first encounters Benerra in the tavern, she refers to her as 'sister.' I learned that without a word like 'my' before it, if it's in place of a name, the pronoun would technically need to be capitalized.

Also in the tavern, the first time Ilmryn told his story, when he talks of how his group captured a surface elf years back, Xulaye speaks to him in future tense about how "when that day comes you will be flayed for your blasphemy." She also threatens to kill him or summon a priestess, but Ilmryn continues with his story. If you have him tell it a second time she stays silent.

During the (I believe second?) Xulaye-PC banter, one of the options allows you to say you voluntarily came to Ust Natha to fight the elves, but Xulaye responds as if you said you were sent there, and speaks with condescention of your blind obediance.

When Korgan fighting in the pits, after the initial conversation, if you talk to him again and say you just wanted to check up on him, he says he's as happy, but then proceeds to rejoin you, warning that he's not happy about being forced away from his fun.

Edited by SentinelBlade77, 07 January 2009 - 10:38 PM.

[Kaeloree]

Thanks, SentinalBlade77! I appreciate the feedback, and I'll see what I can do in v1.1

[Cal Jones]

Also, the banter where she says she knows you are a surfacer, one of the responses has "disapoontment".