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#21 Paul Gargoyle

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Posted 14 February 2009 - 02:53 AM

I usually use Open Office for all my text editing needs: it's free, and it has spell checkers for virtually every language on this Earth (except maybe Esperanto? tongue.gif ).

Well, I do know about it. But, due to some reasons that I completely don't understand MS Office and OpenOffice do not want to run on my laptop, on which "writing and moding" work is done. Because of that to write I am using program, that is in fact overgrown notepad (Notepad ++, if somebody would want to know) which is nice, but, sadly, lacks any spelling check.

Here is another dialogue. I spell checked it, and tried to make as non-awkward as I could. Criticisms highly welcome.

Nalia: Aen, tell me. Did aristocrats was always like that?
Aen Aen: What do you mean by "like that"? It is pretty broad expression.
Nalia: Caring only for themselves, not for their lieges, war-like and absolutely demoralized?
Aen Aenis: That's for sure. Those who have power, abuse it sooner or later. And, as the great philosophers states, it's addicting.
Nalia: So there was no 'better times'?
Aen Aenis: No, and, as I have already told you, I doubt that any 'better times' of equality and freedom will ever come. Wealthy will always press poor, influential ones will pursue their own agendas and so on.
Nalia: You can't be right. At some point, oppressed will rebel against oppressors.
Aen Aenis: Surely. But after they will become oppressors by themselves. This is how the Faerun work.


Edited by Paul Gargoyle, 14 February 2009 - 03:44 AM.


#22 Jenne

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Posted 14 February 2009 - 12:10 PM

Aen Aenis: So, what can you tell me of Avariels?

I think that the plural is the Avariel, not Avariels.

Apart from that (and the above mentioned grammar mistakes (which can of course be corrected by a willing proofreader :) )), keep up the good work.

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#23 Thanatos.

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Posted 14 February 2009 - 03:41 PM

Jenne is correct - all NPC's (mod or otherwise) have said "The Avariel." :)