My curiosity got the better of me. I was hoping to avoid reading any Mage-Origin stories, since it's one I haven't player through yet. Yet I decided to read just the first part of this.
Now I've caught up with everything. I'll have to forgive you though, because it was such an enjoyable read. Two thumbs up from me.
Comments on "Life, Laughter, Blood, Doom"
Started by Bluenose, Dec 17 2009 07:31 AM
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Bluenose
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The gnome-sage of Ral Worcester
Posted 17 December 2009 - 07:31 AM
Back from the brink.
Like RPGs? Like Star Wars? Think combining the two would be fun? Read Darths and Droids, and discover the line "Jar Jar, you're a genius".
These, in the day when heaven was falling,
The hour when earth's foundations fled,
Followed their mercenary calling
And took their wages and are dead.
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Posted 20 December 2009 - 10:38 PM
Ahh, I haz a comment receiveds! :3
Very glad to hear you've liked it thus far, I was already starting to think I was writing it only for my own amusement. ^^
Very glad to hear you've liked it thus far, I was already starting to think I was writing it only for my own amusement. ^^
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Posted 23 December 2009 - 03:29 PM
Sorry for taking so long to comment on this, WeeR! Wanted to catch up to everything first.
I must say, I also haven't played the Mage Origin yet, but I loved the way you did the Harrowing. Not to mention, bringing Jowan into it from the very beginning. Your Suzianna is a most interesting to-be Grey Warden as well, and I look forwards to seeing more of her!
I must say, I also haven't played the Mage Origin yet, but I loved the way you did the Harrowing. Not to mention, bringing Jowan into it from the very beginning. Your Suzianna is a most interesting to-be Grey Warden as well, and I look forwards to seeing more of her!
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
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And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
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Posted 23 December 2009 - 11:22 PM
Thanks. :]
Yeah, um,
Yeah, I think the fade-portions of the game sort of got 'gameified' in the game. They're just puzzles and slaughter, only the fuzzy graphics effects and the flying bookshelves keep them from being just regular places somewhere.
Now I'm not 100% happy with the harrowing; It's very much alike the first draft I wrote of it, just, you know, winging it. So it's kinda random. .p
But there'll be a few more sequences, and the plan is to make them ewul. ^^
Yeah, um,
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, but the harrowing...Yeah, I think the fade-portions of the game sort of got 'gameified' in the game. They're just puzzles and slaughter, only the fuzzy graphics effects and the flying bookshelves keep them from being just regular places somewhere.
Now I'm not 100% happy with the harrowing; It's very much alike the first draft I wrote of it, just, you know, winging it. So it's kinda random. .p
But there'll be a few more sequences, and the plan is to make them ewul. ^^
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Posted 05 January 2010 - 03:13 AM
*snickers*. Okay. First of all, I love the way you portrayed Duncan. Second of all, I love the situation Suzianna got herself into. The atmosphere of that last scene was so great I could see Duncan's look of consternation. Priceless.
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
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And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
