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#1 Shadowhawke

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Posted 13 August 2010 - 05:40 PM

Hey Gorzag!

Okay, that was officially awesome. ^_^ . I loved the way you told it too... just the right length and description to deliver it at the end. Aside from a grammatical error or two, it was a really smooth read. I hope if inspiration bites again that you'll share it with us. :D

Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love

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And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain


#2 Bluenose

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Posted 14 August 2010 - 05:23 AM

You owe me a new keyboard.

And possibly a new nose. When you snort tea down it laughing, it doesn't half hurt :lol:

Edited by Bluenose, 14 August 2010 - 05:26 AM.

Back from the brink.

Like RPGs? Like Star Wars? Think combining the two would be fun? Read Darths and Droids, and discover the line "Jar Jar, you're a genius".

These, in the day when heaven was falling,
The hour when earth's foundations fled,
Followed their mercenary calling
And took their wages and are dead.


#3 Gorzag

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Posted 15 August 2010 - 08:36 AM

Hey Gorzag!

Okay, that was officially awesome. ^_^ . I loved the way you told it too... just the right length and description to deliver it at the end. Aside from a grammatical error or two, it was a really smooth read. I hope if inspiration bites again that you'll share it with us. :D


Thanks! I do have another short story that I've been working on, as well as a bigger Baldur's Gate story, the twelve first chapters of which I've posted over the Attic (which sadly is down at the moment). Maybe I should post that here as well.

You owe me a new keyboard.

And possibly a new nose. When you snort tea down it laughing, it doesn't half hurt :lol:


And here I though that people would by now have learned not to drink near keyboards or monitors while reading stuff in the internet. ;) Oh, well, I guess I'll just have to work overtime next week then.
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#4 Shadowhawke

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Posted 20 August 2010 - 09:00 PM

Thanks! I do have another short story that I've been working on, as well as a bigger Baldur's Gate story, the twelve first chapters of which I've posted over the Attic (which sadly is down at the moment). Maybe I should post that here as well.


That would be great! :D I'd love to see it. :D

Edit: Yes, it's really sad that the Attic is down at the moment. :( But we'll be happy to host your story!

Edited by Shadowhawke, 20 August 2010 - 09:01 PM.

Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love

***

And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain