Hi HighTimeRodeo!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to review this - I've actually been out of my country travelling since April 31st and internet connection has been infrequent. So a very belated welcome to Scribbles!
Now on to 'Takes Time' itself. I enjoyed this drabble. I think you demonstrated a wonderful subtlety in each of the snippets that I really enjoyed. I also liked your Imoen - I think she was a great balance of her essentially cheerful, yet adult, scarred, and grown up self. To be honest, the main nitpick I have is that Sarevok's characterisation disoriented me in some parts simply because 'Takes Time' doesn't delve deeply into his development between his resurrection and the events as Imoen is telling them. It's for that reason that I'd be curious to see more of this story if you were so inclined to write it.
So yes - thanks for sharing this piece with us, and I look forwards to seeing more if it comes!
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Started by Shadowhawke, Sep 07 2011 10:55 AM
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Starlight Seeker
Posted 07 September 2011 - 10:55 AM
Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love
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And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain
