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#1 Shadowhawke


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Posted 25 June 2012 - 11:37 PM

Hi Icedragon, I'd like to start off by saying welcome to Scribbles! :) It's good to see some new writing around here. :D

I'll admit, I've neither played Darian nor "A Dance with Rogues", but you managed to convey the feeling, background and characters in each quite smoothly. "It's About Time" felt a little jarring as a one-shot, however, simply because the emotional impact of it wasn't as self-contained as "Homecoming" and "Not in a Partying Mood". But I enjoyed all of them, and I'm looking forward to more if the writing bug bites again. :)

Through lightning, travel shadow,
Through hell and all above,
Surviving sword and arrow,
Bound stronger by the love


And in the end a witness,
To where the death has lain,
Silent through the sorrow,
Where innocents lie slain