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#1 MorningGlory

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Posted 15 April 2004 - 07:06 PM

Hi, thecursed!

You have a good story going here. Intriguing plotline that kept my attention. (You might want to quickly read through for a couple of needed words that may have inadvertently gotten chopped in the edit. I know it happens to me all the time. ;) )

But it's really a good read, and I'm really looking forward to you expanding it. Soon, please? :D

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Posted 16 April 2004 - 03:08 AM

accualy it was a one time shot. i've no wanting to expand it.

#3 thecursed

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Posted 16 April 2004 - 03:14 AM

grrr. me again :wacko:
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#4 VigaHrolf

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Posted 16 April 2004 - 08:24 AM

I can understand that...

But it was a good story, nice and tight. Good pacing and an interesting plot.

Although I have to wonder about the rate at which your Renal expends lives... good troops are hard to find.

Perhaps we can convince you to grace us with another tale?

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#5 thecursed

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Posted 16 April 2004 - 04:44 PM

i've got a couple back at blacksheep mods, but they're not at all BG. one's a round robin if that could interest someone
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#6 Beyshaliban

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Posted 19 April 2004 - 02:39 AM

Too bad that's a one shot. I thought maybe you were going for a Yoshimo FF.

Anyway, I think this FF board is not strictly BG, right MG?

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Posted 21 April 2004 - 04:44 AM

well here it is. if you are interested, i could warp the story here

#8 thecursed

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Posted 21 April 2004 - 05:21 AM

guess who!
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