Hi, thecursed!
You have a good story going here. Intriguing plotline that kept my attention. (You might want to quickly read through for a couple of needed words that may have inadvertently gotten chopped in the edit. I know it happens to me all the time. )
But it's really a good read, and I'm really looking forward to you expanding it. Soon, please?
MG
Comments on "ambush"
Started by MorningGlory, Apr 15 2004 07:06 PM
7 replies to this topic
#1
Posted 15 April 2004 - 07:06 PM
#2 -Guest-
Posted 16 April 2004 - 03:08 AM
accualy it was a one time shot. i've no wanting to expand it.
#3
Posted 16 April 2004 - 03:14 AM
grrr. me again
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#4
Posted 16 April 2004 - 08:24 AM
I can understand that...
But it was a good story, nice and tight. Good pacing and an interesting plot.
Although I have to wonder about the rate at which your Renal expends lives... good troops are hard to find.
Perhaps we can convince you to grace us with another tale?
VH
But it was a good story, nice and tight. Good pacing and an interesting plot.
Although I have to wonder about the rate at which your Renal expends lives... good troops are hard to find.
Perhaps we can convince you to grace us with another tale?
VH
#5
Posted 16 April 2004 - 04:44 PM
i've got a couple back at blacksheep mods, but they're not at all BG. one's a round robin if that could interest someone
"Destiny, chance, fate, fortune.... they're all just ways of claiming your successes without claiming your failures"
Gerrard of the Weatherlight
Wisdom: Distinguish the extraordinary from the spectacular
Beware My ever shifting avatar!!
Gerrard of the Weatherlight
Wisdom: Distinguish the extraordinary from the spectacular
Beware My ever shifting avatar!!
#6
Posted 19 April 2004 - 02:39 AM
Too bad that's a one shot. I thought maybe you were going for a Yoshimo FF.
Anyway, I think this FF board is not strictly BG, right MG?
B.
Anyway, I think this FF board is not strictly BG, right MG?
B.
#8
Posted 21 April 2004 - 05:21 AM
guess who!
"Destiny, chance, fate, fortune.... they're all just ways of claiming your successes without claiming your failures"
Gerrard of the Weatherlight
Wisdom: Distinguish the extraordinary from the spectacular
Beware My ever shifting avatar!!
Gerrard of the Weatherlight
Wisdom: Distinguish the extraordinary from the spectacular
Beware My ever shifting avatar!!