11 replies to this topic

[MorningGlory]

Farsal! LOL LOL LOL

Great little story, and oh, so telling!! It was really a good, funny, and very enjoyable read. Good stuff! How 'bout some more?

MG

[Celestine]

i second that. It was enjoyable reading Kelsey and Anomen's similar reaction to the robe.

[farsal]

You two are too, too kind! Thanks. I would quote but I don't know how.

[Celestine]

you can use the quote button at the right corner of each post, or you could just cut and paste what you wanted to quote and surround the quoted pharse in [q u o t e] [/ q u o t e] square brackets. or you could use the quote button on the code buttons in the post reply form.

[farsal]

you can use the quote button at the right corner of each post, or you could just cut and paste what you wanted to quote and surround the quoted pharse in [q u o t e] [/ q u o t e] square brackets. or you could use the quote button on the code buttons in the post reply form.


Its the closest I've come to posting a quote correctly. I'll be ready for by your next chapter! No pressure.

[Kirwond]

Hi, Farsal!

Just wanted to say that I enjoyed this story very much! The boys' reactions were priceless! And good move on Sare's part with the advice book. Life is just no fun without men fighting over you.

I had one minor suggestion. I believe Keldorn's last name is Firecam, so his wife would be Lady Maria Firecam, and not Maria Keldorn.

Looking forward to reading more!

[Bookwyrme]

Lol!

I've got any number of things I should be doing. Instead, I read this & laughed. Love it!

[farsal]

It just goes to show that I cannot proof read my own writing. I cannot tell you how many times I have looked at that writing and not once, did it cross my mind that I had Lady Maria's name wrong! I will correct her name.

Thanks everyone for reading it!

[thecursed]

in all a nice and cute tale.

kelsey and ano having the same reaction is quite understandable. when you're gaze (and mind) is taken by a woman in lingerie, you say the first thing that goes throught the said mind.

[Beyshaliban]

LOL LOL

Priceless! Thanks for the laugh!

I am absolutely against burning books, though even I tend to accept exceptions....

[VigaHrolf]

Farsal,

Some funny funny stuff there. The repeated lines by Ano and K were especially funny. Two jealous men seeing 'their' lady in nice silky lingerie.

Course, they coulda just enjoyed the view.

[farsal]

VigaHrolf,

Sorry I did not see your response. Thanks so much and I have enjoyed your writing very much.