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This is just an edited version of the dialog from the raw ideas tread what do you think

Talking to someone in the party I haven?t made my mind up who maybe Anomen if the main character is female.

T It has nothing to do with all this demi-god stuff. It's just 'cause she's a cutie, you know.

What is?

T Everything. Everything she gets away with. Everything we do for her you honestly think we'd be down here in this mouldy dump looking for only the Gods-knows-what and being hunted down by vampires, coweld wizards and muggers if she were ugly?

We're here to give CHARNAME a hand and find Imoen.

T Geez she?s got you under her thumb are you positive you don?t want to clean her boots with your tongue as well.


I wonder what his response would be, maybe if he failed his test he properly would want to start a fight or something. could anyone give me some hints ir tips please

Its been suggested I medievalize the language a little but when I tried it sounded posh and Tallons not posh. Im sorry if my grammer and spelling a little of when I type on forums. Im still not shore about it.

Any comment suggestion Criticism is welcomed and appreciated.

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Thanks Minotaur

or what about this one I think Tallons given up to easily and Aeries not Aerie

Tallon flirts with Aerie. (I wonder what Aklon or Haer'Dalis for that matter would say.)

Aerie- You?re Bleeding.

Tallon- Yeah, swords and daggers will do that.

Aerie- I can heal you if?if you want.

Tallon- Oh Aerie, to be healed by your gentle hands would be pleasure its self.

Aerie ? Tallon you?re embarrassing me.

Tallon ? You remind me why I spent so long learning about Hannali Celanil. Oh my etreil. (or is it quex etriel).

Aerie- Now Tallon stop that.

Tallon- I think I will need to heal myself now.