
Need Help cutting 2 banters
#1
Posted 30 April 2008 - 09:45 AM
Could someone out there give a little help/advise on how/where to cut 2 banters I have going?
I started them long ago before I knew as much about modding (rules) as I do now, and though they have required info they are far to long.
Problem is, I don't know where/how to cut them and still have them make sense - a topic from Banter 1 that the character doesn't Want to talk about might get re-addressed in banter three, say... But mainly they are to long and if I cut them I might screw them up terribly.
Any ideas?
Minotaur In Maze
They say the world is going to Hell.
They are wrong.
The world IS Hell! Always has been, always will be; except perhaps for the five percent or so of the population who can afford differently.
And, if one must reside in Hell, it is far better to do it as a minion of the Devil than as a member of the damned.
* * * * * *
LOVE SUCKS: It makes fools and slaves of us all.
But being alone and unloved is worse.
- Nancy A. Collins "Thin Walls" * * * * * *
#2
Posted 30 April 2008 - 12:21 PM
P.s. One NPC getting fed up with the discussion and the other NPC picking it up later as this second NPC wants to let the topic go is a good way of splitting up long banter... sometimes, it is just too good to split in my eyes though. I have one 2 A4 banter between Ian and Keltor and I shall not split it up.
Edited by Deathsangel, 30 April 2008 - 12:23 PM.
Still modding the Mod for the Wicked... It is a big project you know... And I got sidetracked (several times) a bit... sorry.
However, as we all know, Evil never really sleeps.
Sentences marking (my) life:
Winds of change... Endure them, and in Enduring grow Stronger
It takes a fool to look for logic in a man's heart
Never question the sanity of the insane
The Harmony of Life is Chaos
Living on Wings of Dreams
(1st march 2009) SHS women over me:
Kat: if there were more guys that looked like you out here, people's offspring wouldnt be so damn ugly
Noctalys: you are adorable
~~ I love it, and I am humbled! Yay! ~~
#3
Posted 30 April 2008 - 12:46 PM
Co-creator: Faren | The Luxley Family | Nathaniel
#4
Posted 30 April 2008 - 12:58 PM
MiM - Writer/Designer October NPC
They say the world is going to Hell.
They are wrong.
The world IS Hell! Always has been, always will be; except perhaps for the five percent or so of the population who can afford differently.
And, if one must reside in Hell, it is far better to do it as a minion of the Devil than as a member of the damned.
* * * * * *
LOVE SUCKS: It makes fools and slaves of us all.
But being alone and unloved is worse.
- Nancy A. Collins "Thin Walls" * * * * * *