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[Deathsangel]

12b: (She giggles and flashes you a pure white smile before returning her
     attention to checking her gear.)

Just a personal impression, but Mazzy has never struck me as the "giggling" type, even if she were in love and comfortable in <CHARNAME>'s presence. Perhaps more in character might be:

12b:(She flashes you a pure, dazzling white smile before returning her attention to checking her gear.)

Alike this I don't see her as a grinning person, which stands in her personal innitiated flirt.

[Snowking]

And the preview is finally here, hope you like it!

Mazzy: Excuse me <CHARNAME>, may I have a word with you?

1) Yes, of course. (A)
2) If you make it quick. (A)
3) Bugger off, I've got better things to do. (B)

  A
-----
Mazzy: I was just thinking and I wanted to tell you a little about my childhood, if you
don't mind listening of course.

1) I'd love to hear about it. ©
2) I suppose I've got the time. ©
3) I don't want to hear your stories Mazzy, please be quiet. (D)

  B
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Mazzy: I see, if that is the way you want it you are more than welcome to it. I shall not
bother you again <CHARNAME>. [Romance Cancelled.]

  C
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Mazzy: Thank you. As I said to you earlier I was born in the Purple Hills to the south in Tethyr.
It was a very nice place, there were many villages for my folk and I had a few who I have not
seen since I moved. I missed them a lot when I moved. For I was still quite young when my father died
and we moved north. I was going to become one  of Arvoreen's Marchers like my father was but once we
moved it was not possible. Once I was of age I started training at the temple of Arvoreen near Trademeet.
I passed my test and was given the rank and title of TrueSword.

1) That was a pleasant tale to hear. Thank you. (E)
2) That was very insightful Mazzy. Many thanks for taking the time to tell me. (E)
3) Is it over? Thank the gods for that, I must of slept right through it. (F)
4) That's it? What a relief I don't have to hear any more of that pathetic tale. (F)

  D
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Mazzy: If that is how you feel then I shall of course but out. I had thought, hoped even,
that you would like to hear it but it does not matter. I won't bother you anymore.

1) Forgive me Mazzy, I would like to hear it. I'm just a little busy... (G)
2) Yes, well I do appreciate it. (H)

  E
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Mazzy: Thank you for listening to me. Your grace, it feels nice to have shared that with
someone and I am glad you understand how I feel. I would very much like to hear of your own
some day but I have spoken for too long already. You can tell me later when we're not quite
so busy. [Romance Continues.]

  F
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Mazzy: How could you be so rude. I am sorry I even tried to talk to you. Worry not though
<CHARNAME> for I shall most certainly not bother you again. [Romance Cancelled.]

  G
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Mazzy: I see. I know how much stress you are under and so I will let it slide this time. I
just wish that you could control your stress. I will tell you all about it later since that
is what you want. [Replay LoveTalk.] +1 MP

  H
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Mazzy: I understand. Fear not for I will not bother disturbing you with my stories again,
nor anything else. [Romance Cancelled.]

SK

[Snowking]

There's a saying that fits right now... "The Worst is Yet to Come" -sorry to tell you that

That talk has been modified somewhat, they all have so the previews might not be exactly the same as the final product.

SK

Edited by Snowking, 19 January 2006 - 11:05 PM.