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16 November 2022 - 10:14 AM

Noticed only a few.

 

dornj.tra:
@15   = ~Is that what you truly want? Your weak and pathetic ideals of family will have little meaning once you are dead.  You should instead strive to accumulate as much power as you can while you are still living so that whatever heir you choose to leave behind can continue your legacy destruction.~
dead.  You -> dead. You
legacy destruction -> legacy of destruction
@47   = ~How did it feel when you killed your brother? Could you feel his blood's warmth on your hands? Did it made your heart beat stronger? Tell me.~
made -> make
@195  = ~The recent events: they made me an even better champion. And my patron's power... hah! I will gladly use it to slay those on our way!~
those on our -> those in our
@233  = ~More important things? Very few things feel less important than power and dominance. These are what life is about.~
less -> more
 
dorn25j.tra:
@9    = ~I must admit that his doings made me learn. I would have never become who I am now if it wasn't for egotic plan.~
for egotic -> for his egotic
@29   = ~No matter how empty the road is, you always encounter someone wishing you dead. What makes me wonder if you'll die young, Bhaalspawn.~
What -> That

Typos

19 October 2022 - 10:11 AM

Thanks for this mod! Some suggestions:

 

hexxatj.tra:
@6    = ~Do not put me in an uncomfortable position, <CHARNAME>. I at least deserve to knowm something.~
knowm -> know
@67   = ~You are beyond normal, <CHARNAME>. That is the main reason why "normal life" isn't something you cannot grasp.~
isn't -> is
@144  = ~Sometimes. That's why I keep you close. So I knew you won't scare others. And to refine my own bravery.~
knew -> know
@154  = ~Many act nervous when they realize what I am. There are many predators. Some of their breath. Some don't.~
their breath -> them breathe
@158  = ~They shouldn't fear me. It feels... unreasonable~
unreasonable -> unreasonable.
@174  = ~As you wish.  Though your silence tells me much of what I need to know.~
wish.  Though -> wish. Though
@208  = ~Of course it's different. Just like Ten Towns look nothing like Calimshan. Toril is filled with unique lands, Unique cultures.~
Unique cultures -> unique cultures
@218  = ~Look, there are your personal matters and I don't have time for these. Let's just move on!~
there -> these
@299  = ~If this beast is any close to other animals, it may be awakened by danger. And drow-kind is always followed by trouble.~
close -> similar
@315  = ~Well, I thought the course of this encounter will go quite... differently.~
will -> would
 
hexxa25j.tra:
@24   = ~Whatever. I don't really care what would you do, Hexxat. Leave me now. I have a more important matter to think about.~
what would you do -> what you would do
@42   = ~I don't know. It's really hard to say. We are somehow different every day. I don't see a reason why the such rule shouldn't apply to you, Hexxat.~
why the such rule -> why such a rule
@49   = ~Look, I'm not going to answer that. And I think we should move on. This talks: it's just a waste of time.~
This talks -> These talks (or This talk)
@56   = ~Hmm? Why? You told me what you think. I see no reason why should I comment on that. Those are your thoughts, not a book I may like or not.~
should I -> I should
@63   = ~You remember how we talked about Flaming Fist, <CHARNAME>? I found out more about them. About their work in Chult.~
about Flaming Fist -> about the Flaming Fist
@64   = ~I don't remember us talking about the Flaming Fist. when was it?~
when -> When
@70   = ~Really? That's quite some way from Baldur's Gate to Chult.~
That's -> It's
@114  = ~Mmm. I know many that would agree with you.~
@115  = ~Mmm. I know many that wouldn't agree with you.~
that -> who

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