I'll admit, I've neither played Darian nor "A Dance with Rogues", but you managed to convey the feeling, background and characters in each quite smoothly. "It's About Time" felt a little jarring as a one-shot, however, simply because the emotional impact of it wasn't as self-contained as "Homecoming" and "Not in a Partying Mood". But I enjoyed all of them, and I'm looking forward to more if the writing bug bites again.
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Comments on "Homecoming", "Not in a Partying Mood", an
25 June 2012 - 11:37 PM
Hi Icedragon, I'd like to start off by saying welcome to Scribbles!
It's good to see some new writing around here. 
I'll admit, I've neither played Darian nor "A Dance with Rogues", but you managed to convey the feeling, background and characters in each quite smoothly. "It's About Time" felt a little jarring as a one-shot, however, simply because the emotional impact of it wasn't as self-contained as "Homecoming" and "Not in a Partying Mood". But I enjoyed all of them, and I'm looking forward to more if the writing bug bites again.
I'll admit, I've neither played Darian nor "A Dance with Rogues", but you managed to convey the feeling, background and characters in each quite smoothly. "It's About Time" felt a little jarring as a one-shot, however, simply because the emotional impact of it wasn't as self-contained as "Homecoming" and "Not in a Partying Mood". But I enjoyed all of them, and I'm looking forward to more if the writing bug bites again.
Comments on "Dancing Through Tears"
01 April 2012 - 06:06 PM
Just read all your updates in one shot. I liked what you focused on - the team again and how frustrated Zoe is by everything she's having to face. And all the stupidity on top of that. And, I have to say - love the title, and I can't wait to see how this Shepard changes her galaxy.
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