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#41 Deva

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Posted 10 September 2004 - 10:42 AM

:rolleyes: Just a quick question, but how do you see bethal, class/alignment wise?
I guess I'd say she was a thief/mage, half elven or human, I'm not sure, and neutral good... I don't know about you? ^_^

P.s... that thing the elf calls her means 'fire flower' in elvish... :rolleyes:

EDIT: P.s.s... sorry my writing isn't very good.. I just read my posts and they have been pretty bad... :(

Edited by Hishi, 10 September 2004 - 10:44 AM.

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#42 Erephine

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Posted 10 September 2004 - 04:07 PM

The last post is a bit un-chronological. Bethal sees the buildings and then is suddenly fast asleep, and then she thinks something's missing.

Now, if she saw the buildings, then fell asleep, and then dreamed that something is missing from within her, that'd make more sense in the chronological line ^_^

Else than that, I think it's a very good contribution, and you last ones weren't bad either :)

As for her class, IMO she's a female (duh) human fighter, level one or two, with a chaotic good alignment.

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#43 MorningGlory

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Posted 12 September 2004 - 06:12 AM

Okies, peeps.. :) I have pinned both the story thread and this comment thread. Please, no spam. Make legitimate comments, or use the pm, okay? ;)

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#44 Erephine

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Posted 12 September 2004 - 07:48 AM

Wow, we're stickied!

Please, someone contribute!

*wants to write on* ^_^

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#45 Shed

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Posted 13 September 2004 - 02:35 AM

omg my Fanfic has been stickied! I win! ^_^

#46 Erephine

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Posted 13 September 2004 - 04:07 AM

You should rather be ashamed for the poor number of contributions you made :)

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#47 Shed

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Posted 13 September 2004 - 04:09 AM

I am. Rectifying right now.

#48 Deva

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Posted 13 September 2004 - 10:29 AM

^_^ I like Shed's new contribution... I think Elandir has a little crush on Bethal... :wub:

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#49 MantraSong

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Posted 16 September 2004 - 12:07 PM

I have added another part. I WILL NOT LET THIS THREAD DIE!!! :D
Just because I'm paranoid does not mean the world isn't out to get me!!

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#50 Erephine

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Posted 16 September 2004 - 03:30 PM

Great great contributions.

Bet Gelrandir is getting impatient ^_^

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#51 Deva

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Posted 22 September 2004 - 10:40 AM

I would post again if I had any ideas, but...

PLEASE DON'T LET THIS DIE!

(Apologies for un-necessary use of Caps.)

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#52 Erephine

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Posted 22 September 2004 - 12:43 PM

Same here... I wanted to contribute but couldnt :mellow:

Anyway, great addition MantraSong, and thanks for keeping this alive! :thumb:

(I'll contribute if I can :P )

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#53 Shed

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Posted 23 September 2004 - 01:59 AM

:D it's getting tense...

#54 MantraSong

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Posted 23 September 2004 - 05:04 AM

My fingers are itching to add another post, but I'm trying to avoid posting twice in a row, so someone PLEASE post :D
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#55 Erephine

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Posted 23 September 2004 - 01:46 PM

Okay okay - I've had some ideas... going to try writing them down right now. ^_^

-edit: there, there.

Edited by Lightspeed, 23 September 2004 - 02:35 PM.

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#56 MantraSong

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Posted 23 September 2004 - 03:17 PM

Whoa. Good contribution, Lightspeed, I guess Gelrandir really was getting impatient. :vbat:
Just one question: why would Elandir think that she was a drow, since they don't exactly hide their appearance, even if they are staying on the surface?
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#57 Erephine

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Posted 23 September 2004 - 04:28 PM

He doesn't think she's a drow.

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#58 Shadowhawke

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Posted 23 September 2004 - 05:04 PM

Sorry guys! I didn't mean to not to post for so long. *runs away and hides before the vengeful crowd attacks*
Real life caught up with me recently... in the form of holiday homework. <_< . I'm terribly sorry, though... but what you guys have written is great! Heh, you don't need me... :)
Posted anyway. :P ;)

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#59 MantraSong

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Posted 23 September 2004 - 05:27 PM

YAY 2 contributions in the same day! I really like them both.
Welcome back Shadowhawke! :love:
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#60 Shadowhawke

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Posted 23 September 2004 - 06:23 PM

Heheh... thanks. ^_^ . Your own contributions are great as well.

Through lightning, travel shadow,
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Where innocents lie slain