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#1 Lava Del'Vortel

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Posted 18 February 2013 - 04:01 PM

1. Who are you looking for?

- a proofreader/editor for a NPC mod for EE/BGT/Tutu


2. How much text does the mod include?

- for now it's like 185 kb, but I think it's going to be like 210-220 kb big.


3. Could you say something more about the mod?

- the mod's called White NPC and it introduce a male CN human barbarian romanceable by male CHARNAME. The mod isn't going to be really big. It is supposed to add a homosexual romance for males, as it's not a developped option. While I know some who would like to check this option. Not sure how succesful is the path I created - but sure is, that it needs proofreading as I'm not a native English speaker.


4. Anything more about the character?

- he's rather impulsive, but not a vangeful berserker. He's not a a barbarian of low intelligence, but he's not a genius, too. When player meets him for the first time, he may seem to be more evil than neutral, but that's because of the circumstances. He lost his parents and a inhuman creature took care of him (I don't want to spoil the race right now) and it was she who gave him the new name: she called him White-as-Bones for most of the life - later it was shortened to White.


5. Any deadlines?

- well, the sooner, the better, but I am eager to accept any help and we can discuss the time/deadlines once you send me a message.


6. Do you want just one proofreader or more?

- I will be happy with any help. If there is more than one proofreader, we will decide who's responsible for what.


7. How should I contact you?

- use this topic, I will start a private conversation and send you the materials.


8. Anything else?

- No, I don't think so. Oh, if someone would like to voice him, let me know.

Edited by Lava Del'Vortel, 18 February 2013 - 04:02 PM.

#2 Rin

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Posted 20 February 2013 - 05:42 PM

Hi. This sounds like an interesting project and I would be happy to proof read for you. English is my first and only language so I think I should be able to spot any spelling errors you might have made.

#3 Lava Del'Vortel

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Posted 21 February 2013 - 02:21 AM

That would be great! I will send you a private message in like few minutes :)

BTW - I love your picture ^^ Hedgehogs are cute and my 2nd favorite animals - just after weasels!

#4 Lysan Lurraxol

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 04:44 AM

Hey Lava,


I don't wish to tread on Rin's toes but I'm happy to give White a look over. English is my first language, and I've worked as a writer on other mods. 

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#5 Lava Del'Vortel

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 04:56 AM

You really don't have to introduce yourself, Lysan :) And the White is almost here, as I got a 2nd proofreader :) But I *really* appreciate your offert :) There is another mod I'm working on, but I'm not sire of you'd like to help with something else :) You've probably seen my writing before, huh. However, I can tell you what mod I'm talking about, but I would rather use PM to give you some details :) It's in less advanced development, but there is a reason - it's more complicated and complex :)