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[Aliya]

Vampire Mistress - As an Ultimate Creature!

And a vampire, which one I'll say later, much later...

I have big problems, drawing vampire teeth, btw.

[WeeRLegion]

Essentially, they're normal, aside the sharp corner teeth.
They don't have jaws filled with shark-style mazors. .p



...
Seriously, is that purple thing meant to be a vampire? C'mon, an Otyugh or a Mindflayer maybe, but not a vampire! x***D

Edited by WeeRLegion, 15 November 2008 - 12:54 PM.

[Aliya]

Shark-like Teeth, check!...

That will be Bodhi later...

[WeeRLegion]

What, after being cloned, cross-bred with mindflayers and acid bathed? Whatcha planning to do to poor Bodhi? >.p

[Aliya]

Oh, she'll just develop new powers...

[WeeRLegion]

Innate ability: Illusion/Phantasm: *Appear gooey & tentacley & purple*?
Innate ability: Transmutation: *Imitate Cthulhu*?

Edited by WeeRLegion, 15 November 2008 - 01:41 PM.

[Aliya]

Not that kind of powers, WeeR!

[WeeRLegion]

Oooo! So, she'll be exposed to radioactive waste then, and she gains superpowers? .p

[Aliya]

She isn't a Spiderman, you know...

[WeeRLegion]

You really really sure? .p

[Aliya]

Yes, I'm pretty really

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really really really really really

sure!

This is my comic!

Edited by Aliya, 15 November 2008 - 02:11 PM.

[WeeRLegion]

Aw, I'm just teasing. Sorry if I went too far.

[Aliya]

A short break from the comic, toy know coloring with the mouse, isn't that easy...

[WeeRLegion]

With so many pictures fitted on one paper, I thought I'd give my reply in picture format.


So what I did with the "corrections" thingies; essentially, thinned down the necks, and did a little related fixing on on the back of Beelzebub's head. .p

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[Aliya]

Can I ask, that's issue? I tiny little bit, description, please!

[WeeRLegion]

The usual problems you get are too thick necks, and you often conenct the neck to the back of the skull instead of attaching it to the bottom of it (where it should roughabouts go), it often results in a fairly silly look. .p

Sendai there and Abazigal had quite good looking necks, but I'll still credit that part to the back of the neck being hidden by hair. .p


For Irenicus, there's this... Leather -I'll assume- border running between his mask and the black cover of the back of his head and neck, it looks like it'd pass through his neck under his jaw. Ehm... I'd pretty much need to illustrate that to show what I mean... o-o

Edited by WeeRLegion, 17 November 2008 - 10:33 AM.

[Icendoan]

LOL The dungbeetle == Sarevok!

And, the pokemon it is closest to (ignoring the newest, as I haven't played it) is Heracross, from Gold/Silver/Crystal and possibly Leaf Green/Fire Red

And I agree with WeeR that Mellisan and Bodhi are the best there.

Icen

Edited by Icendoan, 17 November 2008 - 10:34 AM.

[Silinde Ar-Feiniel]

Nice work Aliya! I like Bodhi, she seems quite...cute here! Mellisan's helm is really well done too! I think Sarevok needs a healing potion soon... and Bathazar's ear, needs to be not so tiny IMO... Overall, you've done a very good work!

[Aliya]

As, you recall, I started drawing people. Only a month or so, ago, and I'm still practicing, as you see. So. I you can tell everything, I won't be hurt!

[Aliya]

Phew... Did first page of the comic, a few minutes ago! Enjoy!

Completely mouse coloring.



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