Good to see Tarric running about the board. And it is looking quite solid in its construction as well. Good work.. and I know you so loved having to convert from HTML
VH
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#111505 Comments on "Tarric Senden"
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on 21 April 2004 - 08:02 AM
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Scribbles on the Wall
CDR.
Good to see Tarric running about the board. And it is looking quite solid in its construction as well. Good work.. and I know you so loved having to convert from HTML
VH
Good to see Tarric running about the board. And it is looking quite solid in its construction as well. Good work.. and I know you so loved having to convert from HTML
VH
#127714 A Meeting of Like Minds
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on 29 June 2004 - 11:48 AM
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Scribbles on the Wall
Removed by author for editing.
#154549 Comments on 'The Shade'
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on 20 September 2004 - 08:29 PM
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Scribbles on the Wall
An interesting tale of the macabre and haunting spirits, SConrad. You have quite the story there and considering you are ESL, it is very good.
I also think that, while it is good now, you certainly could make it better. Your descriptions could be fleshed out a bit to give us a sense of the size of the house, its decor, how well kept it is and also a basic description of the four unfortunate souls. Also, one little word thing is I think you meant that the English king desecrated the body of this Scotsman, not descended on it.
But it is good. I hope we get to see more.
VH
I also think that, while it is good now, you certainly could make it better. Your descriptions could be fleshed out a bit to give us a sense of the size of the house, its decor, how well kept it is and also a basic description of the four unfortunate souls. Also, one little word thing is I think you meant that the English king desecrated the body of this Scotsman, not descended on it.
But it is good. I hope we get to see more.
VH
#115647 A Meeting of Like Minds
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on 10 May 2004 - 08:09 PM
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#168211 A Meeting of Like Minds
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on 08 November 2004 - 09:01 PM
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#114132 A Meeting of Like Minds
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on 03 May 2004 - 09:22 PM
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Scribbles on the Wall
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#152492 Comments on "Danse Macabre"
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on 14 September 2004 - 08:50 PM
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Scribbles on the Wall
Seifer,
A great opener piece on Silver Star (which I've only heard snippets about in my modhunting) You get a good sense of her character I think, a good first initial read on something that appears to be a tricky thing to get a handle on. But what was truly stunning in the piece was the pacing and the visuals. The aptly named 'Grateful Dead Chamber Orchestra' and the dancing, the creak fo the grave, the fire worn tree... all very nicely done sir.
I hope to get a chance to see more.
VH
Edit: Correcting names/spellings
A great opener piece on Silver Star (which I've only heard snippets about in my modhunting) You get a good sense of her character I think, a good first initial read on something that appears to be a tricky thing to get a handle on. But what was truly stunning in the piece was the pacing and the visuals. The aptly named 'Grateful Dead Chamber Orchestra' and the dancing, the creak fo the grave, the fire worn tree... all very nicely done sir.
I hope to get a chance to see more.
VH
Edit: Correcting names/spellings
#110366 Comments on "Class Reunion"
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on 16 April 2004 - 11:04 AM
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Scribbles on the Wall
Seif,
I remember this little gem. And it just as funny the second time around. A great episode of Mischaracterization Theatre.
Thanks for bringing it back!
VH
I remember this little gem. And it just as funny the second time around. A great episode of Mischaracterization Theatre.
Thanks for bringing it back!
VH
#179665 Congratulations Jolyth
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on 06 January 2005 - 10:46 AM
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Scribbles on the Wall
Welcome aboard Jolyth. I'm sure things will run smoothly and all that jazz.
VH
VH
#111490 Comments on "Twists of Fate"
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on 21 April 2004 - 07:14 AM
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Scribbles on the Wall
Ru,
Two great pieces here. Loved em both, although for entirely different reasons. The romantic comedy for the just the sheer amusement of it. It is just outright funny.
Keldorn... that's just harsh. I really like it and you can just feel the old knight's concern and pain. And his death so.. tragic...
Great stuff. MORE!!!
Two great pieces here. Loved em both, although for entirely different reasons. The romantic comedy for the just the sheer amusement of it. It is just outright funny.
Keldorn... that's just harsh. I really like it and you can just feel the old knight's concern and pain. And his death so.. tragic...
Great stuff. MORE!!!
#110320 Comments on "ambush"
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on 16 April 2004 - 08:24 AM
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Scribbles on the Wall
I can understand that...
But it was a good story, nice and tight. Good pacing and an interesting plot.
Although I have to wonder about the rate at which your Renal expends lives... good troops are hard to find.
Perhaps we can convince you to grace us with another tale?
VH
But it was a good story, nice and tight. Good pacing and an interesting plot.
Although I have to wonder about the rate at which your Renal expends lives... good troops are hard to find.
Perhaps we can convince you to grace us with another tale?
VH
#108659 Comments on "With a Vengeance"
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on 07 April 2004 - 06:38 PM
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Scribbles on the Wall
Bey,
A wonderful read once again. Always fun to read about a namesake, and this is a most excellent tale for this young lady. Maybe we can convince you to write another? Give us a little more on young Bey.
And also, its always nice to see a punk getting his just rewards.
VH
A wonderful read once again. Always fun to read about a namesake, and this is a most excellent tale for this young lady. Maybe we can convince you to write another? Give us a little more on young Bey.
And also, its always nice to see a punk getting his just rewards.
VH
#108656 Comments on Losing Grip
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on 07 April 2004 - 06:27 PM
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Scribbles on the Wall
I remember this piece as well. A most excellent bit of writing, one I am glad to read again. Glad to see its made its FWS debut.
VH
VH
#108657 Comments on "Witches"
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on 07 April 2004 - 06:34 PM
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Scribbles on the Wall
Bwahahaha... now that is a funny funny tale. Its amazing what bored kids will come up with with a little ale in the bellies and not enough sense in their heads.
And loved the Beavis and Butthead routine.
VH
And loved the Beavis and Butthead routine.
VH
#114345 Comments on "Calimshite Silk, or Good Advice
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on 04 May 2004 - 12:49 PM
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Scribbles on the Wall
Farsal,
Some funny funny stuff there. The repeated lines by Ano and K were especially funny. Two jealous men seeing 'their' lady in nice silky lingerie.
Course, they coulda just enjoyed the view.
Some funny funny stuff there. The repeated lines by Ano and K were especially funny. Two jealous men seeing 'their' lady in nice silky lingerie.
Course, they coulda just enjoyed the view.
#110376 Tavern Fights!
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on 16 April 2004 - 12:30 PM
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IE Mod Ideas
This sounds like it could be an amusing mini mod to add a good bit of color to the game. Not just necessarily tavern fights, but other things going on in taverns. Romantic rendezvous by just random people, women of negotiable virtue advertising and even propositioning PCs and NPCs, storytellers, con artists and all the ilk.
And a few good brawls, either between randoms or some random and the party, with the potential for non violent conclusion and some good banter.
And just random fun like, some poor sob is drinking and you talk to him. He's depressed and you ask why. His lady has dumped him and if you actually listen, you can give him some advice, some good, some bad, some designed to just piss him off. Then maybe see them make up of blow up.
Some random encounters with the Amnian characters associates could be fun. Meet Jan's cousin Rudolph, Nalia's friend Deiter, and Anomen's poker circle, etc...
And a few good brawls, either between randoms or some random and the party, with the potential for non violent conclusion and some good banter.
And just random fun like, some poor sob is drinking and you talk to him. He's depressed and you ask why. His lady has dumped him and if you actually listen, you can give him some advice, some good, some bad, some designed to just piss him off. Then maybe see them make up of blow up.
Some random encounters with the Amnian characters associates could be fun. Meet Jan's cousin Rudolph, Nalia's friend Deiter, and Anomen's poker circle, etc...
#148877 A Hearty Welcome
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on 02 September 2004 - 03:03 PM
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Scribbles on the Wall
The rumors of my disappearance were only slightly exagerated. I think.
Nonetheless, congratulations Bey and welcome to the team.
Nonetheless, congratulations Bey and welcome to the team.
#109014 Comments on "Where o' where can Aerie and..
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on 09 April 2004 - 11:49 AM
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Scribbles on the Wall
Discharger...
A humerous tale, but it could use some style work. What my co Mod suggested above, that you seperate out your dialogue into seperate paragraphs... such as
"So, dude, wanna beer?" asked Neeber. "Sure." said Noober. "Cool, bottoms up!"
is harder to read than
"So, dude, wanna beer?" asked Neeber.
"Sure." said Noober.
"Cool, bottoms up!"
You get much better seperation and clarity. And in this case we realize that Neeber said cool, not Noober.
Also, there are a lot of free spell checkers and such out there (Check out Download.com). And I hate to harp on it, but something as simple as spelling really can make or break a story, because it can take your reader out and break the flow.
Welcome though and I hope that you enjoy your stay in FW FanFic
VH
A humerous tale, but it could use some style work. What my co Mod suggested above, that you seperate out your dialogue into seperate paragraphs... such as
"So, dude, wanna beer?" asked Neeber. "Sure." said Noober. "Cool, bottoms up!"
is harder to read than
"So, dude, wanna beer?" asked Neeber.
"Sure." said Noober.
"Cool, bottoms up!"
You get much better seperation and clarity. And in this case we realize that Neeber said cool, not Noober.
Also, there are a lot of free spell checkers and such out there (Check out Download.com). And I hate to harp on it, but something as simple as spelling really can make or break a story, because it can take your reader out and break the flow.
Welcome though and I hope that you enjoy your stay in FW FanFic
VH
#128515 Comments on "Time to make Morninglory blush... "
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on 01 July 2004 - 08:20 PM
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Scribbles on the Wall
Bwahahahahahahaa!!!!
Thou art truly a servant of the dark one my friend.
Another inspired piece... if only I could maintain that kind of creativity for more than a stanza. I am in awe UU
VH
Thou art truly a servant of the dark one my friend.
Another inspired piece... if only I could maintain that kind of creativity for more than a stanza. I am in awe UU
VH
#111500 Comments on "A Days Hard Knight"
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on 21 April 2004 - 07:30 AM
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Scribbles on the Wall
Hehehehehehe... Edwina Edwina Edwina.
Hehehehehehehehehe
Nice piece Bri. Most enjoyabel and quite funny. And I to want to know how Boo resuced her...
Hehehehehehehehehe
Nice piece Bri. Most enjoyabel and quite funny. And I to want to know how Boo resuced her...
#127870 Og cavman big writting guide
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on 29 June 2004 - 08:44 PM
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Scribbles on the Wall
I believe the big furry pig that Og refers to is a wolf. Because he named it woolf.
But I must say, I do love Og's style and delivery.
VH like OG story!
VH buy Og drink!
LOL
VH
But I must say, I do love Og's style and delivery.
VH like OG story!
VH buy Og drink!
LOL
VH
#108261 Love titbit (minor spoiler)
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on 05 April 2004 - 12:29 PM
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Return to Windspear
Hey. Just to blow the spread on this, I'll comment.
I think it is quite interesting, although the opening part is hard to to assess considering the lack of context. I imagine it some sort of vision or whatnot. But, it is interesting nonetheless.
As to Jaheira's response, the words are definitely in character for her. The light kiss I think is also a nice touch. You capture the stern/sweet thing.
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Also, I would have to agree that the Jaheira romance is the richest and fullest of the major romances, one that ties so well into the rest of the game, even if it is buggy. Always been a fan of it since I gave it a spin.
VH
I think it is quite interesting, although the opening part is hard to to assess considering the lack of context. I imagine it some sort of vision or whatnot. But, it is interesting nonetheless.
As to Jaheira's response, the words are definitely in character for her. The light kiss I think is also a nice touch. You capture the stern/sweet thing.
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Also, I would have to agree that the Jaheira romance is the richest and fullest of the major romances, one that ties so well into the rest of the game, even if it is buggy. Always been a fan of it since I gave it a spin.
VH
#107553 The Village Order
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on 02 April 2004 - 02:53 PM
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Layers of Reality
Whoa.. that's just wacky. Aerazzy? Marie? Ye gods.
#108085 Imoen's hair color is infectious
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on 04 April 2004 - 10:57 AM
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Layers of Reality
Keldorn the Raver. The most notorious of the Order's ravers, Keldorn has been seen shakin his codpiece from Waterdeep to Calimport. 
Love these...
Love these...
#113032 Comments on "Anaria"
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on 28 April 2004 - 10:20 AM
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Scribbles on the Wall
Ru,
I'm really enjoying the Tale of Anaria. I'm quite curious as to what is next. How will Ano react? Kelsey? What about Imoen and Jaheira?
And will hear more from Sarevok. I'm sure he'll have a few nice and kind and comforting things to say.
VH
I'm really enjoying the Tale of Anaria. I'm quite curious as to what is next. How will Ano react? Kelsey? What about Imoen and Jaheira?
And will hear more from Sarevok. I'm sure he'll have a few nice and kind and comforting things to say.
VH
